Editing.

We sat down and tried to get most of our editing done today, we did our first minute and showed it to Mr Smith to see whether we where heading in the right direction with editing, luckily we where so we carried on with what we had already been working on. we had good feedback ' thisis good girls, a couple bits where you need to cross cut but other than that you should e proud yourself ' -Mr Smith. we also got some feedback from our friends which have watched it 'ts amazing, i like the fact that you have a time period and you sticking to it with the room and the cotume'- Joe Parr.